The Almighty Hook
There are a few blog hops that I am really, tingle-in-my-toes excited for, and this is one of them. It's the Hookers & Hangers blogfest. Today it's all about the hook.
I'm going to share the five best hooks (or chapter beginnings) from my novel EXISTENCE. Some of these hooks probably only mean something to me, as someone who knows the novel backwards and forwards. However, I'm going to start with the first hook, which should be the most important--and hopefully the best out of the five. Without further ado, here's some hooks.
So there you have it. A few lines from my novel. I feel like I'm giving all my secrets away :)
I'm curious to know: in the books you've read, is there a first line that stands out more than others?
I'm going to share the five best hooks (or chapter beginnings) from my novel EXISTENCE. Some of these hooks probably only mean something to me, as someone who knows the novel backwards and forwards. However, I'm going to start with the first hook, which should be the most important--and hopefully the best out of the five. Without further ado, here's some hooks.
"Chrissie Fox could taste the metallic sting of time on her tongue."
"The funeral was held three days later at the Rogers Family Mortuary."
"Chrissie sat cross legged on her bed, the pocket watch cradled in her hands."
"Matt put his arm around Chrissie’s shoulders, “It’s okay, love, I’m here.”
"Steel walls, steel door, steel bed frame. Chrissie had once wondered if CITTA had high security prison cells and now she knew the answer."
So there you have it. A few lines from my novel. I feel like I'm giving all my secrets away :)
I'm curious to know: in the books you've read, is there a first line that stands out more than others?
Comments
I don't know that I've ever thought much about first lines of my chapters, aside from ch 1 of course. Hmm...now I need to go look at my WIP :-)
But isn't that always the case in books?
And I agree with Tasha about that first one. "time on her tongue"
And for me it's not usually the first sentence that hooks me. I get pulled in by the first couple of sentences. :)
You got me. ^_^
Good job!
And as for first lines in books, Douglas Adams had some really great first lines.
Thanks so much for participating!
it sets the stage for the book! great job!
I just started Bring up the Bodies by Hilary Mantel, and it begins "His children are falling from the sky." I thought that was a pretty good hook :)
Sounds like a great story, Jenny!
Fun read! :-)